.,, wrote:
said trickle flows
slow so clear
vivacious as crystal
enriching all givers
increasing each lover
while nameless sad
faces race hating
merely their fear
Alexa wrote:
Hold me tight
as lovers do
what we share
joy in lust
is just love
love is just
three little words
Heheheh… It looks like a stair case.
It shouldn’t, originally the lines were encased in boxes. But I can’t copy the design here, the lines disappear once it is published.
A pity.
I’ts cool, anyway.
I am very pleased that it looks like a stair case. I enjoy visual poetry and am thrilled that Alexa has honoured me in this manner.
I write I came I saw
I saw I write I came
I came I saw I write
Robert Bennie
I am honoured that you allow me to publish your poems in my blog.
They are absolute jewels.
Thank you.
This
trickle flows
hold me tight
slow so clear as
lovers do vivacious as crystal
what we share enriching all givers
joy in lust increasing each lover is just
love while nameless sham love is
just sad faces race
three little words
hating their
fear
Wow.
I don’t know how you have done this. It is amazing.
My style and the words I use are utterly different from yours.
Yet you could blend them and they fit like a glove.
It feels wonderful.